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2010-09-06 16:45:40

Unexpected Scene

Your animation was really good, but I think your inspiration, was in the Explosm characters, also for the kind of storyboard, because, a lot of they're shorts are unexpected as this was, but this don't remove the enterteining or additcting as this was.

The funny content you placed was really good, and it was pretty funny and I never would suspect, that the water bottle would be some kind of venom, to be seriously, I didn't understand what had inside that bottle, but the zombies coming and I think devour the person, was really really funny and made me laugh a lot, this remember me again from the Explosm cartoon shorts.

Next time, use more creativity.
Nice animation!
Nice job!
In my opnion, you took the kinds of creative from the Explosm guys.
Do more unexpected jokes haha

Vote 4
3.71 / 5.00 (+ 0.00035)
Score: 8/10
"Unexpected Scene"

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Blakant responds:

thank you for ur brilliant review man!
Explosm rlly do inspired me, but i nvr intend to duplicate his joke in any way...
If u think i took the kind of creativity from him, I'll take that as a very pleasent compliment since he one of the best author/storyteller in Flash history for me! :D

The Best Video Game Ever

2010-08-21 17:21:34

Quite boring

The animation looks like it was from 2001 or 2002, they are animated brush paintings, and they're design is not so good, the face from the character are with a lot of details and the body is 3 clicks of brush painting with different colors, but, I liked the animation from the Mortal Combat one where was sprites, I really liked your camera movements on this part. For the sound and audio, I think was really poor, sometimes, like in the Mortal Combat one, when the guy with skull head split fire in the face of the another guy, it didn't produced any sound, it looked like really tricky and false. Also, the guy voices were not so good, and if you pay attention, you can listen like little booms on the microphone sounding. For the story content, I didn't laughed so much, but my favourite was when Vader eat the cheese ball and says "hmmmmm", haha this was good, but for other stuff, was really boring and sometimes annoying to keep watching.

You really need to improve your movie drawings and audio sounding, but this through was good.

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DarkMatter responds:

Thanks for taking the time to watch and analyze my flash, keep up the good work.

Worlds End Umbrella

2010-06-29 21:49:31

Need to be better

This was an enterteining movie, along with a good representation from it. But the animation, we can see that you was a little lazy to do it, this is most notable when the couple of cats are running up the stairs and I think you could do when they come to the storybook place, the door will be much better animated than that "photo" kind. Now for topics:

{NAME}
The name of it, was like weird, "World's End Umbrella", I didn't catch it exactly, is like when they come to the storybook, they came to the end of the umbrella, like in his top, or this is like they was sent to other "dimension" or thing because they where not seen anymore or you forgot the "World's end ON umbrella" and did not fit.

{CONCEPT}
The umbrella is a tree where is like a building having ladders on it and a secret world all inside it, this is really a magic one, all out of physics on it, but this fit with the music, because, was to come in a place where was everything out of reality just seen on story books, or in fables and such things, so this was one positive point of this movie.

{ANIMATION}
You did this lazy, right? Is just some brush painting and moving their legs in simple onion skin frames, the cumulus of it was they running up the ladders, was really poor, also as I said for the door closing. You should pratice more your animating skills.

{ART}
The art is acceptable, you did good on it, the tree was well designed. But sometimes as the animation, the graphics were just brush painting, nothing in special. One thing I liked is that black things that is like a close of the camera on the film, the place where you did the lyrics of the song, this was nicely done. Nice job!

{OVERALL}
Need a better looking for animating and you should do more well prepared symbols and movie clips for it, don't know, brush painting is really simple and I do not like this. The art could be better, but I give you a positive point for this. The story and concept for it was ok. For your next project, you should do a better drawing.

I give you 7 score and a vote 3.
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The world don't move

2010-06-29 21:28:34

wTf...

Man, what you want to say with that, is just the poor Gary Coleman being cutted, this don't have funny, and by the way I didn't launched any laugh over it, was really a poor animation with a poor song behind it and what you want to show with that. The quality of the music is really low. I don't have more things to say here.

0 score and vote 0.

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Pruit Igoe

2010-06-23 15:53:19

Some things to better...

The animation is really simple, is just some symbols moving, and a music in the background, nothing in special. For the explosions, I think you should draw by yourself, not use these sprites, if you're not so good with this, try to ask for someone in the art portal of Newgrounds. Your story is like a mysterious thing, like, a strawberry destroy the Earth and doesn't know where he goes, you should put more things on it, but like just say this keep that doubts in the air, this was interesting.

The concept was too simple, you should add more things to the menu, or just better some graphics like the title. The animation as I said is just symbols moving, you could add glows or some brightness for the planet, to be more realistic.

Overall >> this need a more constructive story and more realistic graphics on it, but I'm not saying to you do everything perfect, you just should add more details, the drawing from the clock striking the Earth was really good, nice job!

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